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A Stallion's Journey: Chapter 2

Chapter 2: Trouble Brewing; Rob Takes a Stand

A few days have passed since that little incident and things have been going quite well. I've been hard at work helping anypony that needed me but my focus was more on the farm. Two or so days ago, Big Mac suffered a severe injury and that caused him to be out of the farm for a while. I was there when it happened and boy, was it bad. According to the doctor, they said that he'd need to have at least a week's worth of bed rest. He didn't want it but I assured him that it was necessary.

"Listen Big Mac, me and the others can handle the farm. What's important is that you need some R&R. So for our

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Rob Stallion - My First Attemptby *DestinyDecade

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WARNING: This is my first shot at doing him. If you want to criticize, feel free to do so. I will have critiques open.

I got my hands on Colors 3D and I thought, why not. I may as well give it a shot. So I drew my OC Pony, Rob Stallion. It isn't that great but hey, at least I'm trying. If anyone can help give me tips on improvement, please feel free to do so. I will do some traditional art when I have free time so in the meantime, enjoy.

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Critique by =CreativeArtist-Kenta Nov 23, 2012, 5:10:01 PM

Welp, All i can Say is....not bad for a first try! I mean you got his Cutie Mark Right. try to make it smaller. His Hair Should Be Longer Like Robert Light's. Same With The Tail. The Body Needs a Little Work...Same With The ear. But Overalll it's Good! Just Try to Practice Practice Pratice! Beacause As Always. Pratice Makes Perfect! )how many times Did i say Pratice? o.o) Let's See What Afro has to say about this.

Afro: Well The Head's Okay. I know the Creator is Bad with Making Stalion Heads. Like He Said. Make The tail & hair Longer. The Cutie Mark Can be A little Bit Smaller. The Eyes could use a Touch up. And Try Some Shading on the Body,Hair & Tail If Nessicary. About the Body...Yep it could Use a Touch up..... But Overall...Not bad for a first try dude!

Me: Good luck Dude
Who knows...You Could be better At Drawing Pinkie
Afro: Or me,You & Pinkie

Me: Anywhoo. Keep Praticing! & Stay Gold

-Kenta David "The Creator"

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Critique by ~SilverCommando Nov 23, 2012, 9:12:33 AM

Honestly, this is really good for a first try. Colors!3D takes a bit of time to get used to.
It's a very good picture, and I like the design of the pony. However, I think the black outline is a little too thick, which some people may find unappealing. You might want to make the tips of the lines (i.e. his jaw, his mouth) pointer by smoothing off the sides.
Your pony anatomy seems pretty good! The only thing I would point out is that in FiM, stallions' chests are a bit smoother and less boxy.
Overall, great work! I think you did a pretty good job! Sure, not everything's perfect, but you have better skills and more potential than most artists (including, me). Just keep practicing!

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=DespisedAndBeloved Dec 7, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Not bad at all my friend. I'm really glad you gave it a shot. Keep it up and you'll keep improving.

*DestinyDecade Dec 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I have to keep improving.

=DespisedAndBeloved Dec 7, 2012 Student Digital Artist

You can do it! c:

*DestinyDecade Dec 7, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I know.

=DespisedAndBeloved Dec 7, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Good my friend, keep up that thinking. Never doubt yourself. c:

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~LWSkybones Nov 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

It's very good for a first try! ^^ Unlike silly me, i forgot to remove sketch marks ^^" =>[link]
I guess you drew this with a mouse, yes?
A tip i have is that when drawing with a mouse (i've also drawn with a mouse :L) is that try to not hold the mouse too tightly and when drawing, rest your elbow on the table and keep it in a comfortable position then when drawing, try not to move your wrist but move the mouse by extending your arm. (keep your wrist on the table at all times), Using this technique will make your curves smoother.

If you drew it using a tablet, i reckon the lines need to be thinner [i don't use tablets so i have no idea ^^"]

*DestinyDecade Nov 19, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

I used a 3DS with the program Colors 3D.

~13609421 Nov 16, 2012

This was a good try. You have more skills than i do. Practice is all you need. Great one old chap!

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I know and I will keep doing it.

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